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A girl lost her innocence
when there was no one to care
so she begins to age
while the Furies stare

They have plans for the princess
hiding within her spirit
yet she's slowly dying
and she can never know it

because she's just a dream in a 12 year old's head
and they'll never know that they're all really dead
the paths that they've chosen, to tragedies they've led
now their lives balance on a thread

Eldritch memories
of your murders in dreams
blood at the scene
of who loved you, it seems

Crying dull fire
tore the ends off the sheets
and sugar coats all of
the caramel streets

Lick off the terror
and kill all my glory
just fucking admit it
it's me you're ignoring

I may just be a dream in a 12 year old's head
but it may surprise you, I'm nowhere near dead
if this really is a dream, I will question no more
little girls have a sick sense of humor
©2006-2010 ~darkstarenchantment
:icondarkstarenchantment:

Author's Comments

Honestly, this isn't truely macabre and/ or horror, but that's the closest I could come as far as the theme of it.
I thought it was rather thought provoking and pretty random, however. If it doesn't make complete sense to you, then I've done my job. =^.^=
If you any comments, ideas, whatever... feel free.

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:iconalwaysthereneverhere:
nice, i like it.

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** 98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this into your signature **
:iconlilred9:
this is really great! you have an amazing sense of rhyming and flow. keep writing

<3katielynn

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I learned the lesson that everyone is alone.
And your eyes must do some raining if you are ever going to grow.
But when crying don't help and you can't compose yourself.
It is best to compose
:icondarkstarenchantment:
Thanks! That means a lot... I've only had a few friends critique my work, and well... you never know if your friends ae just being nice because they're your friends, or what.

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:blackrose:I'm nowhere near dead.:blackrose:

:dygel: :censored: :blackrose: :jackdirt::devilish: :noir: :liquify:

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